Monday, March 1, 2010

A Blast Before I Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

If a swine had a thinking mind
Like it has a pulsating heart,
The ill fortune it has to find
In furnace of a cooking hearth,
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Gautam Sen
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Adeline Foster 25 September 2011

Yes indeed, satire and a fun poem. I introduce mine - The Protagonist - Adeline

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Romeo Della Valle 23 July 2011

A very impressive, well penned and poignant write! After reading it, I felt like a blast within my heart and mind! It really moved me! Thanks for sharing this excellent write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 August 2010

Slicing Satire…indeed blasted …but a message of animal killing did you convey? ... thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Mark Nwagwu 12 April 2010

yes, a satire indeed, and a great one. expanded my heart with a blast

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 March 2010

beautiful....the satire is too good here. You killed me to fill your stomach...so i will definitely create a havoc in your life....and what a havoc it was....thank you.

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Gautam Sen

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