Thursday, November 10, 2011

A Blanket Of Gray Comments

Rating: 4.5

A blanket of gray covers the sky,
With lighter patches, few and far between.
Gloomy, overcast, from horizon, to horizon.
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Juan Olivarez
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Brian Jani 27 June 2014

Fantastic poem of the seasons and all they bring about

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 May 2014

Remarkable format of three-line stanzas and the meanings presented superbly with the words you chose. I like how you painted the scene and the very inspiring message in your last lines. Perfect.

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Adeline Foster 11 December 2013

Ah, finding beauty under a blanket of gray, lovely. Read mine - Leave Leaves - and - In Season - Adeline

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Smoky Hoss 04 April 2012

Very good one, and a good message.

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Claudia Krizay 23 November 2011

What a wonderful message this poem gives! ! ! ! Everyday is a gift to be thankful for- that is so true! Treasure each and every moment- this poem makes me happy to be alive! -Claudia

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