Friday, March 20, 2015

A Blank Page Comments

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This page is white as a white can be
Til I lift my pen and trace
A scrawl of black from an inky sac,
A tale of the human race.
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David Lewis Paget
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 March 2015

Awesome ballad! Written in splendid rhyming flow with great twists n turns and surprise with the snake. Scenic imagery makes yor bland paper come to life in poetic ink. Great to read u again!

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Douglas Scotney 20 March 2015

I think I'm taking that message to heart David, but when is enough enough?

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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