Tuesday, June 26, 2007

A Blank Canvas Comments

Rating: 4.3

Blank. that is how I feel.
I have no emotions to fulfill.
Nothing left.
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Amanda May Moore
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Kim Barney 27 August 2015

Well written, Amanda. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!

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Amanda May Moore 04 October 2019

Wow! I had no idea! I have not been on here in so long... perhaps I need to begin writing again... I do have a lot bubbling inside of me waiting to be written down on paper! Thanks!

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2015

Nothing left in life! With the muse of survival. Nice work

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Ramesh T A 27 August 2015

Emotionless heart is a blank canvas without any colour being used to produce picture!

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Ben Gieske 06 December 2008

You write your poetry from the heart and it is full of your feelings. That is the kind of poetry I find worth reading.

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Amanda May Moore 04 October 2019

Wow, thanks :)

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Michael Fischer 17 June 2008

Good write...I like how you used painting (or a lack there of in this case) as an analogy to describe your feelings of emptiness. We've all been there before...we've all experienced a void in our lives...so people can definitely relate to it. You also kept it short and simple. Nice work...Top marks! -Michael

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Issam Hal 15 August 2007

hi amanda so nice and tnx for this poem

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Melvina Germain 15 July 2007

A wonderful poem, complex yet one can find symplicity here. A blank canvas waiting to be fulfilled, a blank canvas, not but will. I like the abstract flare to it. A big (10) from me, Excellent Amanda.--Melvina--

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Eric Pennington 09 July 2007

I hope I could be the color in your life!

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JoAnn McGrath 29 June 2007

I like this.....even though it portrays being blue...you left the reader with hope beacuse a blank canvas can become anything.....nice

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Amanda May Moore

Amanda May Moore

Ypsilanti Michigan
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