A Blackened Mind Comments

The way algae floats Across a blackened pond Is as clouds Across a blackened sky, nicely compared, beautiful poem. Thanks for this nice poem. 10

Algae floats across a blackened pond like the dark cloud floats in sky. In water distanced headlight is passing by. An amazing imagery is drawn about writing. Beautifully penned poem is shared.10

Beautiful poem Shannon Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

Interesting analogy: floating along with the nasty green surface stuff and light reflections, when all the really good stuff is clearly at the bottom. What, I wonder, would it cost us to really get wet? Scary stuff when you're in over your head: It's sink or swim.