A Blackbird In Oxwich Wood Comments

There is something very meditative about this fine poem like all the world is contracted in your keen observation of the bird and for a moment time stood still. Beautiful.

Beautiful imagery, so detailed, as if I am actually looking at it! Rhythm of this poem is gently soft and soothing. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A lovely poem about ther black bird, it says how minutely you observed every movements of it..... loved it

Nice poem. I like Blackbirds, as indeed I do all birds.

As you may have noticed, I've adopted the blackbird, the crow, the raven. I enjoyed the detail in this poem. I tend toward the abstract and so appreciated the insight that comes from the actual.

This is very good David. I was never fond of the Blackbird or Crow the name that I knew growing up as a child. We as children always tried to shew them away. You described this bird in good details and how it survived. When I spy a Blackbird from now on I will appreciate it's beauty. Very inspiring write.

I love the language you used here. It's perfect.

Beautiful, I love these birds so much.