Monday, August 25, 2008

A Black Rose Comments

Rating: 2.9

A black rose can stop the beat of ones heart…
A black rose brings the scent of death as it tears love apart…
A black rose makes nightmares reality…
A black rose fills my life with uncertainty…
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Iron Panda 23™ 04 May 2010

i likes it (: .........even if it is sad

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

u have a brilliant imagination..wonderful poem

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Ashley Ormon 06 October 2008

I like the repetition and also the idea of having a black rose. Many times in poetry red roses are used and in some ways you used its contrast. I feel though that the ending '..including you..' could have been different. But perhaps not. None-the-less interesting read.

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Anthony Lonergan 04 September 2008

I told you that i would look at your poems and i did. their not as bad as you said they would be.

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

I recommend this poem because it has repetition. That leads to memory. Beyonfd that, it doesn't have much more going for it, because a poem like this needs an ending. I can't say much for it. GW62

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Yonela Mali 26 August 2008

a black rose can be what you choose it to be, does not have to mean the end of life

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Trinity K 25 August 2008

... i cherish my love for you...... : )

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