A Black Rose Comments

i likes it (: .........even if it is sad

u have a brilliant imagination..wonderful poem

I like the repetition and also the idea of having a black rose. Many times in poetry red roses are used and in some ways you used its contrast. I feel though that the ending '..including you..' could have been different. But perhaps not. None-the-less interesting read.

I told you that i would look at your poems and i did. their not as bad as you said they would be.

I recommend this poem because it has repetition. That leads to memory. Beyonfd that, it doesn't have much more going for it, because a poem like this needs an ending. I can't say much for it. GW62

a black rose can be what you choose it to be, does not have to mean the end of life

... i cherish my love for you...... : )