Tuesday, January 26, 2010

A Black Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once, I fell in love with a black man
I saw him fighting for his mistakes
I saw him crying for regrets
I stood by him, but we couldn’t stand together.
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Noel Horlanda 04 February 2010

Black is black, black is beautiful, black is power, etc. I'm no racist and I like this piece. Yeah, some people has to take the chance to change, once you have it, then bite the bullet. You got good lines in free verse. Easy to grab, easy to digest. Well done.

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Kesav Easwaran 29 January 2010

A good poem symbolic on contemporary politics...truly represents the state of the affairs in the States on a well painted poetic canvas...liked the assessment you make of the situation prevailing, Lyxo...thanks...10

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jimmy zepp 27 January 2010

Dear poet friend, deep lines indeed, must read it again couple of times again, I see pretty familiar faces from Abe Lincoln; his civil rights, to Martin Luther King and his silent fights...Michael Jackson and his mysterious death... As I said, must read it again, to comment, but 10 ++++ is the minimum...Bravo! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mayamu Jabateh 26 January 2010

i relly love this poem cuz it talk about pastense and presentense and also futuretense

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