Thursday, September 10, 2020

A Black Line Comments

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Thou have seen me,
I too have seen thee
Day after day,
Still we have to stay
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Susan Williams 10 September 2020

a black line- - I am working on that- -I keep thinking a death has occurred and it is too soon for the lovers to come forth in public.... but you say that black line will Always keep them apart.... hmmm... I am on love's side if that helps

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 September 2020

A lovely poem full of hope. True love will make things right and possible.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 September 2020

there is true love where The black line will certainly disappear,

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