A Black In The Eye Comments

Funny and well observed. Been there a few times myself

Neat piece.

Neat.

Great poem, remember me about a morning

Dear Adrian, very nice poem and impressive. please comment on my poem. with best wishes ramesh rai

Hands swing around a circle of numbers. Rachel Ann Butler

wonderful symbolist poem, lovely to read...10+++++ from me

Bosh! Got me! haha - great little poem this. Ruthy: -))))

I took this as a humour poetry i suppose...its nice and well written poem...

Hands swing around a circle of numbers till they reach out both of them, grab you by the lapels then smack you in the eye. You're late for work again..... very well penned and intellegent thought over. i like it... read mine brown eyes, miss i miss you and home bound with inflamed mind

hard task master...there yanking up poem....mercy master ;) well written cheers