Thursday, April 24, 2008

A Black Hole Of Dark Empty Nothingness Comments

Rating: 5.0

My world is a black hole of dark empty nothingness,
It rains blood all of the time,
I can't see most of the time,
I don't even know why I'm alive,
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Troy Clark 24 April 2008

Not bad of a poem but theres much work to be done, Good poem though, with a small amount of diffrent wording, some more enjament, and other stuff, you poem would be pretty good.

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Kayse Oberley

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