Thursday, October 19, 2006

A Black Cat Crossed My Path Comments

Rating: 4.9

A black cat crossed my path
On a night of a full moon
He was carrying a pack on his back
And dancing around like a loon.
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Connie Webb
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Kesav Easwaran 27 November 2008

a good narration...in perfect style and rhythm...your black cat Fred is a gem...and so is your write...well done Connie,10

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Bonnie Collins 31 August 2008

Filled with ever so much imagery, and penned with such detail it leaves the reader smile on his face and a beautifull picture of Fred. I enjoyed that the best, this is very very good Connie, all the way from opening stanza till the exit... Bonnie

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Dr. Lubna S. Khan 23 August 2008

wow is all i can say! WOOOW!

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 August 2008

Here is a woman who likes cats and has an imagination. That is a winning combination. I loved this creativity and so I gave it a 9. It was also written well. GW62

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Meggie Gultiano 21 October 2007

this is a nice story poem, Connie. Enjoyed this one thanks for this love and hugs, Meggie

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Alison Cassidy 13 October 2007

A charming blend of the humorous, the metaphysical and the quirky make this lively story. Enigmatic, graceful and often distant, cats make a wonderful subject for poetry. Thanks for a great write. Love, Allie xxxx

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