Friday, October 12, 2007

A Black Box Comments

Rating: 4.0

somewhere in my frame
a black box that clocks
my every heartbeat
every wink of the eyes
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john tiong chunghoo
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Marvin Brato 16 October 2007

Everyone got a black box.... a soul! It may represent also a conscience which dictates which is good or bad. Thanks bro, top marks.

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David Blake 14 October 2007

Nice poem I give it a 10. Ty for your work.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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