I was in my backyard sunning, while lost in warm daydreams,
Enjoying red raspberries, while listening to the birds sing.
Lying on afternoon chaise, in the golden midst of hot July,
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WOW i concur absolutely with the line: For sometimes the things we dare to imagine, have the greater appeal. great pen this is
Your all natural poetic descriptions are very charming....delightful to read...enjoyable
stanza 5 " rapberries" . well, i KNEW 'you blacks' (hee-hee) were great rappers. is this how ya all do it? a favorite line: " Like the china which always returns, to its same familiar shelves! " i don't 'get' this one: " And with time's extensive arm, he played the part that he'd chosen! " Another interesting 'alien tale'. bri :)