Saturday, October 11, 2008

A Bitter Tear Comments

Rating: 4.9

The falling leaves of autumn
lay scattered where they fall
nurturing the land with goodness
before their end days call.
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David Harris
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Mana Kavingyan 12 February 2016

Healthy poem

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

to whom much is given much is expected. we must all give back something. to even the score with nature. nice work david

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Guy Lip-more 15 November 2012

Fantasic write, sad but true. I rate this 10

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Tsira Goge 11 October 2008

Hello David, I have read this poems as the sermon... It was pleasant To me, remarkably...10... Tsira

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Thad Wilk 11 October 2008

A splendid poem and reminder that we must - 'give back' or all this world we have will come - to a bitter end. *10*! ! Best regard! Friend Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 October 2008

A great write David,10 yet again...

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Brianne Lindline 11 October 2008

I love this poem so much.10 from me.

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David Harris

David Harris

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