Saturday, March 6, 2010

A Bitter Mistake Comments

Rating: 4.8

A bitter mistake
Of two darkened souls.
A temptation they couldn't resist...
Leaving them both heartbroken,
...
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Hannah Diane Williams
COMMENTS
Joseph Moore 14 March 2010

This poem is incredible, it prefectly depicts the sadness and regret involved in an abortion. 'How He can use our mistakes And turn the heartbreak they cause' I especially loved this part, even when we sin and make 'mistakes' we are still employed by God for His better will.

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Hannah Williams 14 March 2010

yes...I read your poem, and tried to comment on it, but the computer was being so flipping stupid. I loved your poem by the way. Oh, and I wrote this becauase of the book, To Save A Life...you should read it if you get the chance :)

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Adeline Foster 09 March 2010

Ah Hannah: How many young souls have learned that bitter lesson. You said it so well. Yet will it prevent others from making that same bitter mistake? Sadly not likely. I invite you to read my Bloom Of Youth. Adeline

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