A Bitter Kiss Comments

Interesting and surprising, takes one aback. Read mine Who Am I Adeline

First love, first betrayal, a story told before and told again, and yours aspires with the good, so long since I read one of yours, still a nice experience.

I read it... it felt like a concrete blow... harsh and over-emotional... thanks for sharing

Emotions well expressed. Congratulations dear poet for it being 'poem of the day;

Joy and pain overwhelming emotions that is painted

Powerful display of emotions, my friend. Congrats' on having this poem voted as 'poem of the day'. I am so proud of you. Stay blessed!

To be fooled by a kiss Knowing much lies ahead Is to give life a total miss And live dull and morose as lead........ Very good write and I welcome you to my page too

Beautiful. Each word is heartfelt.

Fantastic poem. Loved reading it..

Great poem! Well done!

Oh! this is really striking hard! !

this is excellent, beautifully written

The poem captured an emotion and stored it to be felt by all readers. Marvelous!

I just totally identified with this totally

Fantastic...Mindblowing.. Loved it.

So very very beautiful...

The title is a poignant oxymoron; this is a deep expression of the heart, it touched me.

I love this poem I get the message your sending and I can feel the sorrow with each word I read it's a lovely poem you've got great talent

Hits straight to the point. Truely astouding.

I love this so much! Short yet hard hitting. Simply wonderful.