### A Bite Of Being Apart Comments

Your style takes a little getting used to, but once the reader has done that, its pure magic.

You have a very unique style of writing.

Crisp, sweet love poem.A few metaphors used nicely.Well done Sarwar

Sir..this is indeed a very creative piece...compelling...the title is what attracted me the most..I loved it..10

interesting one. very creative idea. keep it up.

Wonderful facts of being apart! .. with such clues get healed..! well written!

New style. Very creative. Nice poem to read it. Enjoyed

unusual...but interesting. keep it up

a novel way of writing poetry

Bravo! ! ! ....Loving the fresh style my friend..great flow of sensitivity and jam packed with emotions that flood this amazingly composed piece....Fine work from you Sarwar......keep them coming 10++++

SARWAR, YES, YOU'VE VENTURED INTO A NEW GENRE, ONE YOU CREATED, AND IT'S FUN TO READ. WHAT I ENJOYED MOST IS THE SENSITIVITY, THE IN-THE-MOMENT CONNECTION TO FEELINGS AND TRUE DISPLAY OF HONEST EMOTIONS. THANK YOU!

A lovely new style of poetry stemming from a creative poet!

lovelt write.. i lov ehte creativity you used in forming it.

I like the way you have written this Sarwar, thanks 10 Lynda x

You are one of kind indeed Sarwar..., .... this again is very entertaining and nice to read.. as always I read it like couple of time, very musical and nice to read..10+++ cheers// best wishes shan

I completely agree with this innovative, not so innovative all in all, style. I think there is an experience in the last time of this author...I remember a movie for its title: 'Frantic'.

different...very different in approach and narration..well done sir

a poem filled with richness and many ways to savor the thoughts and feelings. Your inovation keeps us guessing and makes your poem jump with meaning.

innovation personified! !

Tempting...love refines itself in the inferno of the eyes....let it burn more intensely! highly persuasive write!