Sunday, November 29, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Bite Fright- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

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Mamta Agarwal
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Vidi Writes 13 December 2009

Inspite of the bite of Preventive apple... Doctor on his way... Something fun Something serious too.... Fright of a bite...! ! ! Good one. Enjoyed the read. Still a query.... How are you dear poet?

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Ranjit Ravindran 29 November 2009

It feels nice when I find out that people still dare to bite deep into an apple rather than slicing them into pieces and consuming. Enjoy your apple & have a great time.

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Catrina Heart 29 November 2009

An apple a day keeps the doctor away! ! ! though dentist may come since we have this sensitive molar.......nice senryu done! ! ! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 November 2009

a Dentist could be on his way! nice humorous piece Mamta...a genuine senryu...10

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