Thursday, February 7, 2008

A Bit Of Paper Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every bit of paper
you see dancing on the floor
has a story to tell
of how it got there.
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David Harris
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Guy Lip-more 15 November 2012

An idea 'out side' the box for a poem, though a really good write. I like the thought process...

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Duncan Wyllie 14 February 2008

The journey goes on my friend, you have the poets touch of story telling Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 09 February 2008

Your thoughts are quite creative David, your observation of that piece of paper is fabulous. I can see it dancing in the wind going from place to place, fantastic. I like this one very much David. Melvina

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JoAnn McGrath 08 February 2008

: O) ...you are seeing a poem in every bit.....lol

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