Wednesday, August 19, 2009

A Bit Of Love Everyone Needs. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes are blinded,
By things only i can see,
They are deep inside me,
I deal with them each day,
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zainab khawaja
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 September 2009

Nice poem, Zainab. Don't let your secrets eat you. Share them in words and keep writing. Love is for everyone; you will get your portion. Best Wishes Naseer

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Vandavasu Vittal 20 August 2009

Your simplicity is complexly meaningful. Excellent poem this has inspired me to write another poem which I will send to you soon but this poem really I can understand your strife........................

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 August 2009

Lovely wording lovely piece! 10+

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