A Bit Of Good Advice? Poem by Sandra Feldman

A Bit Of Good Advice?

Rating: 5.0

Life is short
So make it
Pleasent,
Help and Love
Will make it
So!
Never underestimate
The Present,
Try to fix, bad
As you go, along.
And love All
Living creatures,
God and nature
So generously,
Made, you know.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A most pertinent advice, Sandra. Man needs to live a fulfilling life by making it useful to all creatures,

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" Never underestimate The Present" live in present, throwing away the baggage of the past. Top score, dear poet.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 November 2024

Sandra, if we all followed the great wisdom so profoundly expressed in this gem of a poem...this world would indeed be Paradise.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 November 2024

2) The smallest act of kindness blossoms...into Love.

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Rob Lamberton 03 November 2024

"Pleasent"

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Sandra Feldman 13 November 2024

Thank you all for your extraordinary comments! Much obliged.

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Sandra Feldman 13 November 2024

Thank you

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M.J. Lemon 04 November 2024

This is beyond good avice, Sandra. It is perfect. A magnificent verse.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 November 2024

So true, everything flows from Love. Our faith in God will see us through

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 November 2024

Indeed, a great advice! Life is ephemeral. We cannot undo what we have done in the past but we can do many things for the present.

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