A Bit O' Fun! Comments

Saucy, mad and funny.10

Love the phrase 'Toothy-grinning shimmyers' - I saw 'The Chipendales' years ago, but give me a real loving man any time (in fact anytime soon would be good!) Brilliantly expressed by a real woman!

It isn't often that television inspires a rollicking and humorous poem like this, Fay, one that's a rip-roaring treat for the reader! This delightful poem was a tour-de-force of your wonderful talent as well as a darn good poem. I'm just wondering if this goes on every night? ? ? ! ! ! Carl.

They were the days my friend may they never end a real fun poem jim

this is so enjoyable read...... i just loved it

Should I tell you I don't get it? I mean I got it. No I mean I had it.No I mean I got some.No wait I didn't get any, Oh Hell you know what I mean.Great Story

TV does interfere, when it comes to evening games of.......love. 10 Bob

This is great.... with just the right amount of sauce to make it spicy!

Cute! And you didn't even wait til you show was over? -chuck

Amazingly clever, sharp, and whitty! Your creativity is simply heady... Happy I found you in a sea of nothingness. Me, your sworn fan from now on- Thanks. Deva

Is that a roll in the hay and who needs a TV anyways fun…lol This is a wonderful piece of work with sweet emotions. Scott

'Come on, let's have our bit of fun.' Yes, Fay, OUR bit of fun; not A bit of fun - for there's nothing like what is truly yours, what you make for yourself, for YOUR fun is like no other since, as tou say, 'I got you babe' and who's looking This is moving and sweet, the first poem I read this morning and it will be with me all day.10 indeed. Mark

who needs television? ? lol...10^2..

Yeah, right! You weren't looking! ! Then why did you keep the telli on?

Laughing bags here Fay...Just at a picture of the 'Grand Finale' while the band played on...Great one Fay. Sid xxx

Lovely! Would love to have a smart comment to make (probably wouldn't be me tho' then!) , suffice it to say that even two or three lines in to this comment I am still wearing the smile that you set going! ! ! Yep: we may be a bit older than today's youngsters, but we still know how to have fun! ! ! Still smiling! ! ! ! Love and best, Tony.

Great fun read Fay (you knicker waver you) 10 from Tom

Great read Fay you have a wicked sense of humour Chris 10 +++

Feeling frisky are we Fay.... :) 10

Why did Lou Reed's '69 hit, 'Take A Walk On The Wild Side'...keep sweeping thru' my head, while reading this hot & spicy after-midnight express-ion! LOL! you never cease to satisfy...ooops...that didn't sound so good...even after midnight....Excellent Penning, you Ageless Cornwall Quiller, you! A Big 10 from FjR! F j R 2009