Friday, February 20, 2015

A Birthday With Moon And The Lady Grace Comments

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Come on, hurry up, and let us walk to the moon,
I know his language and I can talk to the moon,
Moon has promised to come on the earth,
Tonight you'll see my art and my worth,
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Richard Blay 21 February 2015

''Surely, Grand Pa, please carry dry fruits in a bag'' please, do. I like the imagery. Good work, Akhtar

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Valsa George 21 February 2015

Beautiful birthday dedication to your little grand daughter! You know very well her preferences in dressing...... pink dress, ribbon of shocking pink, high heel sandals and what not! Now she is ready for her trip to the moon with her grandpa and Lady Grace (Grandma?) . Wonderful imagination!

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Khalid Saifullah 20 February 2015

A wonderful poem, as a child I too always tried to appear older, now I try to appear younger...........10

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