Thursday, August 20, 2020

A Birthday Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Command me O'Lord
To be gentle and comforting
And not to be tired and selfish
For my eyes are dimmed with tears
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Rob Lamberton 24 February 2023

"Command me O'Lord"

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 October 2020

What a superb lovely appealing supplication poem on a birthday, soulful and we all return to God one day. Kudos.

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Kim Barney 23 August 2020

Ooooh, sorry I missed your birthday, my friend! I hope you had a good one, and this is a beautiful poem/prayer, appropriate for a person of any religion or no religion at all but who believes in a Supreme Being.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 August 2020

A touching and heartfelt piece....10++❤️❤️❤️ Happy birthday, dear Ma’am LeeAnn.

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M Asim Nehal 20 August 2020

Nicely composed. On birthday such repentance does makes sense. At 50 you are starting afresh again. Birthday wishes again.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 August 2020

Let the birthday come every year to ask forgiveness from God Let the birthday come every year to be pious for the future But Let the birthday not come every year to do crime and ask forgiveness again and again!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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