Thursday, June 11, 2020

A Birthday Gift For You(For Daniel Brick) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought
I should present you a flower
On your birthday
A beautiful and sweet scented flower
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Bharati Nayak
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Nabakishore Dash 06 December 2021

Excellently crafted awesome poem mam.worthy of being revisited.Thanks to your better choice of birthday gift.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 July 2020

A nice birthday gift to a lovely poet.

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A very promising birthday gift that will keep flowering for ever. The pretty flowers will turn to sweet and sweet smelling fruits and many more promises.....10

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Bharati Nayak 28 June 2020

Thank you Khairul Ahsan ji for your appreciation of the poem.In fact Daniel Brick has read this poem and sent his appreciation through Poem Hunter message.I posted it as a poet's note through editing.However it does not show on the poem.

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Bharati Nayak 28 June 2020

My thanks and gratitude Madam Sylvia Frances Chan for reading and commenting on the poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 June 2020

Loved your wonderful thoughts on how you would like to celebrate poet Daniel Brick's birthday by offering him a sapling ather than a scented flower as a gift. It seems the poet has not yet read your poem but I am sure when he does, his joy will know no bound.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 June 2020

2) I wish to congratulate him either through your most amazing BirthDAY Tribute, although Belated. With such a most beautiful Tribute, he surely must have jumped very high (just a way to describe how glad he would be) . I have enjoyed immensely reading this gorgeous BirthDAY Tribute, dear Bharati. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved great family. UpToMyPoemsList.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 June 2020

An incredible thought to give a sappling as your BirthDAY present, dear Bharati. So fascinating to follow your way of thinking how you finally decide to give him a sappling instead of a beautiful and sweet scented flower. I am touched by realizing how affectionate your emotions are for Poet Daniel Brick, the more touched am I what poetry can bring amongst poets. You have created a Greatest Tribute for Danile Sir!

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Kim Barney 14 June 2020

Fantastic poem, Bharati! What better gift than a tree? I just planted a new tree in my yard a couple of weeks ago. I probably won't live long enough to see it get big and strong.

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2020

Thank you Kim Barney for your wonderful comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 June 2020

@Kim Barney, may you live long enough to see the plant get get big and strong!

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Wonderful Poem, Bharati! What a sublime gift Loved this poem. To my PoemList.........10

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2020

Many thanks Madam Geeta Radhakrisna Menon for your lovely comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2020

It is really a marvelous poem created by you in favour of birthday of apt poet Daniel Brick taking Nature as a gift. It is your optimal imagination that a flower may be wilted soon. I cite...But then you will be saddened /When you will see its wilted petals / With no colour and no fragrance. Hence Nature is the best to offer as a birthday presentation. Brilliant Composition.10

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2020

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your beautiful comment.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 June 2020

There the birthday gift is exquisite The seed of flower is the core of loving heart which implants tree of more flowers of loving field of heart Beautiful poem shared.... Deserves 10++

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2020

Thank you Mahtab Bangallee for your kind read and beautiful comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2020

My B'day is coming soonly Thanks for the GIFT SIS

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2020

Thank you Poet Poet for your reading and appreciating my poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2020

A wonderful poem! Beautifully composed dear poetess....10++++

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2020

Thank you Dillip for reading and liking my poems.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 June 2020

A superb ever lasting birthday gift and so also the philosophy behind the choice. Thanks for sharing.10+.

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2020

Thank you poet Ratnakar Mandlik for your kind read and appreciation.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 June 2020

A well authored fantastic write. Simply womderful....10++

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2020

Hearty thanks Bernard F.Asuncion for reading and liking the poem.

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Kostas Lagos 11 June 2020

An everlasting gift...great poem

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