I thought
I should present you a flower
On your birthday
A beautiful and sweet scented flower
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A very promising birthday gift that will keep flowering for ever. The pretty flowers will turn to sweet and sweet smelling fruits and many more promises.....10
Thank you Khairul Ahsan ji for your appreciation of the poem.In fact Daniel Brick has read this poem and sent his appreciation through Poem Hunter message.I posted it as a poet's note through editing.However it does not show on the poem.
My thanks and gratitude Madam Sylvia Frances Chan for reading and commenting on the poem.
Loved your wonderful thoughts on how you would like to celebrate poet Daniel Brick's birthday by offering him a sapling ather than a scented flower as a gift. It seems the poet has not yet read your poem but I am sure when he does, his joy will know no bound.
2) I wish to congratulate him either through your most amazing BirthDAY Tribute, although Belated. With such a most beautiful Tribute, he surely must have jumped very high (just a way to describe how glad he would be) . I have enjoyed immensely reading this gorgeous BirthDAY Tribute, dear Bharati. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved great family. UpToMyPoemsList.
An incredible thought to give a sappling as your BirthDAY present, dear Bharati. So fascinating to follow your way of thinking how you finally decide to give him a sappling instead of a beautiful and sweet scented flower. I am touched by realizing how affectionate your emotions are for Poet Daniel Brick, the more touched am I what poetry can bring amongst poets. You have created a Greatest Tribute for Danile Sir!
Fantastic poem, Bharati! What better gift than a tree? I just planted a new tree in my yard a couple of weeks ago. I probably won't live long enough to see it get big and strong.
@Kim Barney, may you live long enough to see the plant get get big and strong!
Wonderful Poem, Bharati! What a sublime gift Loved this poem. To my PoemList.........10
It is really a marvelous poem created by you in favour of birthday of apt poet Daniel Brick taking Nature as a gift. It is your optimal imagination that a flower may be wilted soon. I cite...But then you will be saddened /When you will see its wilted petals / With no colour and no fragrance. Hence Nature is the best to offer as a birthday presentation. Brilliant Composition.10
There the birthday gift is exquisite The seed of flower is the core of loving heart which implants tree of more flowers of loving field of heart Beautiful poem shared.... Deserves 10++
A wonderful poem! Beautifully composed dear poetess....10++++
A superb ever lasting birthday gift and so also the philosophy behind the choice. Thanks for sharing.10+.
A well authored fantastic write. Simply womderful....10++
Excellently crafted awesome poem mam.worthy of being revisited.Thanks to your better choice of birthday gift.