Sunday, March 31, 2013

A Bird Without A Nest Comments

Rating: 4.5

There's a pain inside my mind
it seems to make my teeth grind
there's a pain inside my chest
it comes at times when i'm most stressed
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Ray Quesada
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R.benjamin Abate 09 April 2013

Hey, Ray. I am a fan of Ginsberg (For the record) . I really like this a lot. The line Like having a million friends but can't call one your best along with the feeling I received from the entire poem reminds me of a quote by Robin Williams that goes something like, The worst thing in life is to end up with people who make you feel all alone. I think that Facebook and Twitter (along with other sites) are creating a place where people are being dehumanized by easier forms of communication and this causes people to feel very lonely. -Ralph

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Gajanan Mishra 31 March 2013

good write. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Titi Dale 31 March 2013

Nice! You have a way with words...

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