You came in my life,
When I was a teen,
A girl with a dream,
A girlwitha heart,
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Kind of a heart touching piece of art, if i may assert. Thank you for publishing.!
Most wonderful poem madam.I enjoyed it.so beautiful poem.1000000++++++++++++++
he king of my nights and Hero of my days to come.. You sipped only once and paused, As if with the torn reel of time Nothing could we talk, - -i am no more the prettiest......... love, desire, wishes, a night full of romance and passion. all those desires are penned here so well dear poetess. God bless u achieve your dreams and fulfill it. tony
Beautiful rendition of words elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Anita.
This is my revisit Very impressive write, Anita, You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
You sipped only once and paused, As if with the torn reel of time Nothing could we talk, nor did share Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. thanks poet I read your poem I am very happy and I really enjoy your poem great imagination 10++++++
and u became a doctor like me great teenage poetry its been ages
A nice poetic imagination, Anita A. D. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Nothing could we talk, nor did share Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. Love your poem Didi. Great sharing. 10+++
I was no more that pretty loveliest. But bird without nest. Nicely crafted poem to sketch helplessness. I loved the poem. huge 10+++++ Binaya
Busy good poet doc why don't you compose more it relieves stress u kow
Any way the lover responded positively. Thew tension of the love well pictured here in this poem.
While I had my temper lost - total base of the poem, very beautiful and thought provoking.
I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. Nice poem dear poet. Thanks. 10+++
I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. A very tragic poem, a bird without nest. Thanks poetess. 10++++
Thanks Anuranjita for the reading and commenting on my poem.
Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. A beautiful poem shared with us. Thanks for the sharing of this lovely poem. 10+++
Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. Great work.
good poem of seperation