Monday, September 5, 2016

A Bird Without A Nest Comments

Rating: 4.8

You came in my life,
When I was a teen,
A girl with a dream,
A girlwitha heart,
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Anita Aparajita Das
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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 September 2020

good poem of seperation

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Navod Dilhara 28 November 2019

Kind of a heart touching piece of art, if i may assert. Thank you for publishing.!

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 23 June 2019

Most wonderful poem madam.I enjoyed it.so beautiful poem.1000000++++++++++++++

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Ojok Isaac 25 August 2018

lovely piece if poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2018

he king of my nights and Hero of my days to come.. You sipped only once and paused, As if with the torn reel of time Nothing could we talk, - -i am no more the prettiest......... love, desire, wishes, a night full of romance and passion. all those desires are penned here so well dear poetess. God bless u achieve your dreams and fulfill it. tony

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

Beautiful rendition of words elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Anita.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 April 2018

This is my revisit Very impressive write, Anita, You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Yiyan Han 26 January 2018

Excellent write of Sorrows as a teen

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 January 2018

You sipped only once and paused, As if with the torn reel of time Nothing could we talk, nor did share Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. thanks poet I read your poem I am very happy and I really enjoy your poem great imagination 10++++++

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O Poet Me Poety 19 December 2017

and u became a doctor like me great teenage poetry its been ages

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Anita A. D. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Nothing could we talk, nor did share Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. Love your poem Didi. Great sharing. 10+++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

I was no more that pretty loveliest. But bird without nest. Nicely crafted poem to sketch helplessness. I loved the poem. huge 10+++++ Binaya

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2017

Busy good poet doc why don't you compose more it relieves stress u kow

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 09 October 2017

Any way the lover responded positively. Thew tension of the love well pictured here in this poem.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 29 September 2017

While I had my temper lost - total base of the poem, very beautiful and thought provoking.

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Sasmita Rani Nayak 26 September 2017

I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. Nice poem dear poet. Thanks. 10+++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 25 September 2017

I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. A very tragic poem, a bird without nest. Thanks poetess. 10++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 09 October 2017

Thanks Anuranjita for the reading and commenting on my poem.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 20 September 2017

Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. A beautiful poem shared with us. Thanks for the sharing of this lovely poem. 10+++

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

Thanks Ranjan for your kind visit and lovely remarks.

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Prativa Rani 20 September 2017

Tears rolled down as if to declare I was no more at my best, I was no more that pretty loveliest. But a bird without nest. Great work.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

Thanks Prativa for your kind visit and valuable remarks.

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