A Bird’s Tragic Love Story Comments

amazing this is wonderful

Though birds they are the most loved ones and poem is also good.

Love could build the thickest wall and could cause more damage than we presume but without love, we could never understand what is it mean to be happy and sad..! ! ! Fair opinion about love and affliction. Well done! ! !

It seems amazing, that love which everyone yearns for so much could destroy people at the same time. ' it never flied...it never lived happily'. awesome i say.

I absolutely love what the repetition does to this poem.10/10

that's a stunning poem i liked how it began and ended up.............that's wonderful!

'Tis better to have love and lost, than not to have loved at all. Great poem.

'These are mending days of a bird' Rachel Ann Butler

Legacy and fall of a bird's love story....well done 10+++

''Pure love doubts on it’s amply fall. Pure love giggles on it’s gaily gabs. Pure love blames on its happy deems.'' a wonderful definition of love.....10++

very tragic story indeed..simple, but very creative.... very nice narrative poem indeed..enjoyed it very much..thanks 10++ for the entertainment

wonderfull imagination.nice poem.posted 10 for u surya

a bird's love takes wing...gets tired loses flight...looks sad..good narration, Kranthi...ten for you.

good poem. imagry is verry nice in this poem. 8.5

Truly tragic story but magic of love never fails.................. Good write.............