Saturday, August 22, 2009

A Bird's Eye View Of Time-Keeping Comments

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Same date extends over two days
After the moment it dawns in the east
Before it sets in the west;
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam
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warner treuter 25 April 2010

Hmm. of course we use what we have, and what we have is time, time being composed of an awarenes of past -present-future, which is also the milieu in which we grow, an awaremess outside of time being not, so far as we know, necessarily in the present, so it looks like we are stuck with time until and unless we become enlightened, wharever that may be. Again, a marvelous poetic dream, the kind I am fond of. And look forward in time to.

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Marieta Maglas 12 April 2010

excellent metonymy ''When we simultaneously observe having bird’s eye view'' wonderful abstract poem 10/10/10

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Ramesh T A 22 August 2009

Time-Spirit is activating modern mankind more than before! Competition is burning all! Timeless state is what everyone longs for. Time was there, is there and will be there as it is a continuous process. Before Big Bang and after it too it is continuing! But man's time begins with the dawn and ends with Sunset everyday and varies everywhere due to rotation of Earth round the Sun. Your views are interesting to read! Nice!

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