A Bird's Eye And Heart View Comments

Its very fine! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i enjoyed it

I relish this poem/ alluring penning/ A wonderful theme/Top marks! !

a complicated view of the world I say!

Absolutely great! A great advocate for birds! Congrats and thanks.

A great theme penned excellently. It shows the poet's concern for the environment especially birds and also portrays the darker side of us mortals as seen through the eyes of a bird that has been given human values. A very creative piece indeed!

Excellent and fascinating, effective metaphor, using the symbolism of a 'bird-eye view' on the eggregious situation of the corrupted world, sinful, depraved, sadistic, vile mankind. Quite the assessment, and seems fairly correct. Lovely presentation. Well done.

A rhythmic poem and uniform ending for each stanza. The central idea is great with those images and reader could feel the pain of the poor by poverty / less fortunate human did try their best to survive. And finally they have to sacrifice what they love for the basic needs. Well done my friend.

It is a very nice poem, to the point and really suits the poem.... i don't know much.... This is all i can say.

We visualize different sections of the society in this well knitted poem.The helplessness of people is exposed using great imagery. Nice.RekhaMandagere

We visualize different sections of the society in this well knitted poem.The helplessness of people is exposed using great imagery. Nice.

It is a great poem showing sympathy for helpless and downtrodden. But those who at higher resting places should try to bail them out of their miserable lot. Great imagery. Thanks for sharing.

If this a real bird eyes then how human can feel about ourself? :) i mean this is great idea to point out our daily life by the eyes of other...creative and i like this piece it gave new sight of view :) ...Empowerment of observing sometimes reveal more hidden things, discover a real taste of reality as this 'bird' tell...we never see how we can see in our view..this poem is great example, it was like we never can see how people see/think about us when we walking, doing something, our behavior, our communication...we may see we are okay but same like when we see another person we may say this guy is good, bla bla bla mea we view other...so when the 'bird' see human is like this so is that good to keep this or we need to improve it? ...what i can say well done.nice words-Unwritten Soul

You get in the 'eye' and 'heart' of a bird to show us life from other perspective.You presented freedom of nature and the limited world of humans.The fight of species for life, you expressed it in such great scenery, so amazing details that escape to us, to the people in daily life...Cristina Teodor

the last but one para is the gem of the poem and of the poet.10 marks. shan