Monday, August 1, 2016

A Bird's Chase And Bee's Flight Comments

Rating: 5.0

On one of my morning walks when the
Day felt ignoble and routine, suddenly
A black bird with a coarse shriek came
Flying violently in air above my head.
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 12 February 2019

into my March showcase (2019) this is headed. Thanks. bri :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 May 2018

A beautiful piece of poetry! Loved reading it! Thanks dear madam for sharing! (10)

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Annette Aitken 14 August 2016

I read this one in the august list of Bri....I very much enjoyed reading it all over again, the visuals you discribe are wonderful. Annette

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Very interesting poem you have written about nature and your experience about morning walk. Today's survival plays important role tomorrow's luck is uncertain. Amazing this is really...10

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Valsa George 06 August 2016

Today the bee must have escaped its predator.... But who can predict its future tomorrow.....? . A casual scene turned into a beautiful poem!

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Savita Tyagi 06 August 2016

Thanks Valsa for your comment. Glad that you liked the poem.

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Amar Agarwala 01 August 2016

You have encompassed nature so beautifully in this little poetry. Thanks for sharing it!

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Savita Tyagi 02 August 2016

Thanks Amar for your comment. Glad that you liked the poem.

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