Wednesday, April 20, 2011

A Bird On The Wire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond a bird on the wire
Is a sky of light blue triumphing sapphire.
I looked up at the sapphire and the bird
Thinking if I could only sing a song of sunshiny words.
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Gayle M. Citrus Maize Water Nora Shoshone Doherty Winchester, story song Glen A, Sweeney +
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Smoky Hoss 26 January 2012

This is such a pretty poem; and I love that line: ... sing a song of sunshiny words., that is so good, it takes me to far away places of wonder. Great poem.

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Patti Masterman 22 January 2012

For some reason this reminds me of childhood- a shiny time with no blots upon the rainbow (mostly) . Well done.

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Adeline Foster 13 October 2011

You preserve brief jewels and globules of descriptions with words. Read mine -Sunlight's World - Adeline

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