A Bird Is Calling Comments

Wow. Wonderful poem...last line too lovely..loved the presentation.. Vipins you are in the Popular Member top on list in Dubai, right...Congrats...

nice write but i think it would sound better if you would make the last line and stop wandering like a strayer. anyway its a good imaginative write

The singing bird is the emblem of new hope.The conflict within one's soul gives rise to optimism.Nice presentation Vipins.

You need to hide your fears under a layer You will get it from your heart's prayer And stop wander like a strayer''............. thats perfect! !

Beautiful poem, and wonderfully expressed... Faith in our own selves can help us see a better tomorrow..

Good Flowing Piece, Nice Write

We can say it is a wonderfully flowing poem, but the meaning is fear of the future. Do your best to develop a faith that whatever happens it has to happen and you will get over it, you will learn from it. Whatever problem we have we created it somehow with our own negative expectations, and only WE can solve it. Think about how to, make plans, but do not beg God to take it away from you, because it will not happen. It is there for you to learn. If not more then when later you'll have a good life, you will appreciate it and be grateful for everything after. That is what I do. In my time when we had the WWII and I was 10 years old, the bombs were falling, dead bodies around me, no food, but my father had the faith when he said: We shall stay alive and we did. OK I went through with chattering teeth, great fear, and I could not do anything about it, but wait patiently upon the Lord and see what happens. And it passed. Now I bless each day and I bless a better tomorrow, so I am always happy, healthy and well and what goes on on the other side of my street, I know God knows, I do not have to.

Wow! well my friend, you really are inlove..im so happy for both of you, but never forget that you need to work each and every passing minute to keep the spark alive...both of you..love is like a flower that need to be watered regulary, a love is like a bird...if you hold it too tight it'll suffocate, if you dont hold it tight enough, it'll fly away...all the best boy....awesome write...Siya.

wow! great! fantastic! What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

Bingo! Marvelously done! I like the natural setting of the poem for perfect heart prayer.... I hear a bird is there calling When the snow was falling Meter and rhythm flows along with novelistic ideas in this poem making this more poem poetical! Top marks bloke! Wear these smiles :) :) :) :) ha ha ha!

Great wisdom expressed here, Vipins. The heart's prayer is so important in our life. It is important when we are sad, when we are joyful, when we work, when we rest, when we play, when we are wth friends, when we are lonely, when we give, when we receive, in the morning, in the evening, at night, ... You got me really thinking here, what a wonderful poem.

Nice style. Enjoy reading your piece.

A great flowing poem, great work my friend.