Friday, January 6, 2017

A Bird In The Winter Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Newly grown colorful pretty wings,
Learn how to fly in the winds exciting,
I listen to its tone, know what it sings,
I know him well who you are inviting
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Indira Renganathan 24 September 2017

It's a love poem, I write and reserve....lovely words have crafted a lovely poem...interesting throughout....thanks Akhtar for sharing this lovely work with us...God bless you

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 January 2017

An amazing poem of beautiful thoughts and nice rhymes.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2017

This is fantastic poem......

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Abhilasha Bhatt 09 January 2017

Each and every line full with the emotions and lots of whiff......loved it :)

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Valsa George 09 January 2017

Everything about this poem is fresh and refreshing!

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 January 2017

Beautiful flow of words.... Clouds are vagabond don't you see, Frozen cold droplets now do not fly, Fell on the warm earth like a bee. Quite a love poem falling on the earth. Loved reading it.

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