Wednesday, January 12, 2011

A Bird In The Birdbath Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bird in the birdbath splashing around,
Failed to notice the cat, sneaking up on the ground.
Happily splashing in the little birdbath,
He became susceptible to the felines wrath.
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Juan Olivarez
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Patricia Grantham 23 February 2013

I really adored this poem, Glad for the bird and sad for the cat. A good laugh and a good write. Thanks.

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Smoky Hoss 31 October 2012

What a neat little poem/story; love this one pardner.

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Valerie Dohren 28 May 2012

A very sweet and lovely little poem about the harshness of nature.

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Indira Babbellapati 15 May 2012

amazing story-telling!

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Claudia Krizay 17 December 2011

LOVE THIS ONE! I can relate to a lot of your poems because I too am a lover of nature.

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Lynn Glover 19 January 2011

Juan, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful words about nature. I really love this little poem and I'm also happy for my feathered friend. Great work.

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