Saturday, May 11, 2019

A Bird In Summer Night Comments

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A Bird in Summer Night

A bird is singing all through Night with heart,
She is putting forth her pain for someone,
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Prabir Gayen
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Ayan Mondal 30 June 2020

Night with unspoken voice brings Joy to birds, The birds are the voice of the Night, It's Soul, Stirring the sleepy Mind they sing to us, breaking the Mind and fancy to set No-Mind...+

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Carl Roussell 12 August 2019

An excellent poem, thanks for sharing.

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Meethi Mondal 01 June 2019

The night is deep and painful for deep Joy, The Joy of touching life with love She sings, The singing is calling for no reason, With empty heart She sings to express her Being. ........ beautiful

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Pranab K Chakraborty 17 May 2019

In the darkness She is invisible, Only Joyous pain is visible deep, ........................................ Quiet romantic the idea to illustrate such beauty of emotional expectation.

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Prabir Kumar 17 May 2019

With deep compassion The poet of the night, The singer of the eerie soul carols, Like fish in water waving and wave, she is like a wave in the sky and waves

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Prabir Kumar 17 May 2019

Night with unspoken voice brings Joy to birds, The birds are the voice of the Night, It's Soul, Stirring the sleepy Mind they sing to us, breaking the Mind and fancy to set No-Mind.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 May 2019

This poem is as like as the bird of summer night no cacophony; so songs from its throat as if the solid rhythm of Beethoven tone to ton lac of tunes coming from this night lovingly The Bird makes fascinated the poetic pen The Bird smiles with a dreamy dimple to fetch the power of poetic ink..........//// superb poem

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Jankovic Zoran 15 May 2019

Birds with a thriller in the voice are birds of freedom and love. Great comparison, my friend.

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Prabir Kumar 14 May 2019

Stirring the sleepy Mind they sing to us, breaking the Mind and fancy to set No-Mind........

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Prabir Kumar 14 May 2019

With deep compassion The poet of the night, The singer of the eerie soul carols, Like fish in water waving and wave, she is like a wave in the sky and waves.

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Valsa George 14 May 2019

The bird remaining invisible amid the branches of trees in the cover of darkness pours forth her sadness and sorrow in beautiful songs! The song cuts across the wilderness and falls in our ears, creating in us waves of joy and sorrow alike! A poet is like this bird. He sits in his lonely chamber chanting poems of beauty, love and pain! Beautiful poem!

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Prabir Kumar 14 May 2019

This comment is poem itself.....Great lines from great Poetess...////

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C F 13 May 2019

your poem,10+: the summer song of your sad bird in the night made me even sadder as i think of the wide sky which wraps the whole world in one vast sadness, even though i am here, and you live so far

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 May 2019

The bird you depict is so beautiful n wonder so many come to read u PG I DO 2222222222222

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Sekharan Pookkat 12 May 2019

Waves of the song, brings me the pain of summer nights and the darkness deepens into absolute sorrows of invisible sadness.

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Prabir Gayen 13 May 2019

Very beautiful comment...it becomes a beautiful poem...thanks

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Prabir Kumar 12 May 2019

Heralding the passing time the bid Calls, Joined by fellow birds She make a deep chorus, The song of seasonal Joy, sound moments, She sings to break the sleep of ancient Time.

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Kostas Lagos 12 May 2019

Thumbs up for this poem!

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Meethi Mondal 12 May 2019

Night with unspoken voice brings Joy to birds, The birds are the voice of the Night, It's Soul, Stirring the sleepy Mind they sing to us, breaking the Mind and fancy to set No-Mind.

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Srijita Mondal 12 May 2019

Excellent picture of a bird(drawn with words) 🐦 calling all through night with heart.. 💓 While reading I feel I can hear her song....really wonderful expression..💕

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Prabir Gayen 12 May 2019

A symbolic poem with a symbolic bird.......////////

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 May 2019

A lovely poem, Prabir...10++++

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