Tuesday, February 19, 2019

A Bird In Hand Comments

Rating: 5.0

And I liked egg—today in hand,
Than hen tomorrow in dreamland;
I thought: the egg could hatch
Tomorrow more to fetch,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Indira Renganathan 23 June 2019

Of course humorous with those interesting ending lines

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 June 2019

Thank you Indiraji, you may like to read my piece on 'Humour' written in 2009 and recently dug out by Dr Swain.

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M Asim Nehal 24 February 2019

Ha ha ha Very well thought, indeed humorous with a serious punch line at the end.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you Mohammad Nehal for your feedback.

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Hans Vr 22 February 2019

Very good. A smile and an aha moment. I loved it

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you Hans Vr, and welcome to my poems.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2019

A fun poem in limerick, Aniruddha....10++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

Thank you so much, Bernard.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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