Friday, December 15, 2017

A Bird I Would Like To Be Comments

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A bird that remains within the limits of earth,
a bird that attempts to fly in the skies,
fails, comes back after learning its worth,
smiles, and says, "See you again."
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rich in reality yet flying high with fantasy! Well done my friend

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 December 2017

I am a seeker, A bird flying high in the sky, In that moment of flying.... a blissful state in air where i am free...full of space, A vast expanse of azure blue sky.

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Bharati Nayak 25 December 2017

Our fantasies are our desires to do what we practically unable to do.Observing a bird fly inspired man to make aeroplane. A really amazing poem about bird.I like how your flight of imagination took you from a bird on earth to a fairy.

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Lora Colon 16 December 2017

A beautiful poem of fantasy and illusions. I, too, love birds - all birds. I envy their ability to walk on the ground, and then be able to fly to the highest perch atop some tree or rocky ledge. And I pity the birds that cannot fly. Evolution has dealt harshly with them. But if I had a choice, I, too, would love to be a bird - but I can't decide what kind. But definitely one that could fly! A great poem - it stirred my imagination to create wild dreams.

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