Friday, May 13, 2005

A Bird Came Down The Walk Comments

Rating: 3.8

bird fun, they are all up there
drizzle, the row of little robins on the wire
a lost bee flying by, takes a round and flies off,
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john tiong chunghoo
fun
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Edna Javelosa 29 March 2008

a strikingly vivid picturesque presentation of bird watching..brilliant write..

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Sandra Fowler 30 January 2007

A lovely poem in your own unique style. And a compliment to Emily Dickinson as well. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Robert Howard 26 January 2007

Beautiful work. I loved the repetition of Bird fun at the opening of each stanza. A worthy tribute to the lovely Emily Dickinson poem you printed.

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Linda Hepner 23 December 2006

I like yours more than Emily's! Linda

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Michael Gale 25 October 2006

Great poem kind sir. An easy ten recieved. God bless all poets-MJG.

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John I like your writings I'll read more

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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