Sunday, May 23, 2010

A Bird Comments

Rating: 3.1

I am up in a high wire
comfortably to retire
watching the afterglow
like a bird - Swallow
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Ency Bearis
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Miriam Maia Padua 13 October 2011

nice write... seems there's a music here made by a bird..... and you have successfully put life to a bird in your poem... I can still hear its tweet2 and the sounds of a lively flaps of its wings

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 July 2010

Ornithological poetry with nice metaphor… words are like flying birds… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS again tried to post and this time responded n

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