Friday, November 23, 2018

A Bird Comments

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He was shopping at Walmart.
When a thug pulled out a gun.
For his life he started to run.
The thug shot him in the back without a word.
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Lamar Cole
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Eva Mae Witt 25 November 2018

So well written Lamar, Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Practicing Poetess 23 November 2018

I hope that someone was able to give him medical attention to save his life. And that the thug was apprehended and handcuffed. Lamar, on the subject of Walmart, please read my 'The Calamity of Black Friday.' Thanks, and be safe this holiday season.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2018

He gave thug in middle finger bird. An amazing poem is very well penned.10

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