A Bird Comments

wishing to be like a bird, in a world full of freedom, sailing, soaring, winging, and swooping, Beautiful lines of a nucely penned poem.

Thanks bri, , for adding my poem to your favpoem list.. Thanks for that. And i didnt realy much re-read the poem when i uploaded it, u made me realise i made sme typo errors, i mearnt bestowed and not bestone, and to her gaiter feathers and not features... A bird that add to the beauty of the day, which makes her looks more gorgeous in her protective covering of clothed feathers and not features. Will have to go for an edit. Thanks bri..

Beautiful poem. The bird that touches our heart. I love it.

i also plan to use your poem in my upcoming (usually-monthly) showcase of PH poems, the June 2018 edition. my showcases are displayed in my PH list of poems, and their titles contain the month and year they are first to be viewed. Authors are always recognized by name. any questions? please ask. thanks. bri :)

(cont.) .. O What little bird, bestone with such beautiful faith, i think you 'want' the word bestowed! i don't think bestone is an English word. ;) bestow verb: confer or present (an honor, right, or gift) . example of usage: the office was bestowed on him by the chief of state welcome to PH! bri :)

(cont.) ..though some of your English is unlike mine, i'm mindful that your 'first language' probably is not English, in which case i give you very high marks for your English and poetic skills. i 'love' birds and watching them, so that adds to my enjoyment of this poem which i now send to MyPoemList. (cont.) ..

joysful moves...or joyful? joysful is perhaps a NEW word? not bad! i especially like these lines [but what do you mean by gaiter features? ]: spinning to the tallest tree with greatest faith, Her pleasant shape blesses the sight of the day, making her creature more gorgeous in her gaiter features, .......(continued) ..

Thanks so much pals, sam, dammy, i realy appreciate your comments al the way from facebook. Micheal, naughty you, we'll chat more on fb.. Thanks.

Sailing, soaring, winging and swooping. Realy love reading this poem aminat, u did a great job in describing the way you feel about this bird.. Up up away she goes nice 1 dear. Its sam from facebook.

Hi, poetess lewa, this poem is exceptional. I read it over and over again. Flying like the bird together with me (smiles) . Well made poem..i love it. Thanks it micheal from facebook.

Hi aminat, really enjoyed reading this poem, i like the description u made about this particular friend and wanting to be free like her up up away to the sky. You did a welldone job. Its dammy a friend from facebook. Thanks