As you were sitting near the window
For the birds arriving from distant country
Your voice gently settled
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Your title A Bird attracted me. Such a 'simple' title is easy to remember, but may not be as alluring as one more 'complicated'. On this site, entering....a bird, ...A Bird, or...'A bird' onto its Search Anything line gives 313 poems! !
ohh...313 poems is quiet a big number. Hope they differ in content and expression. Regards.
re (regarding) your Poet's Notes, Was something/someone 'transformed' in the poem? bri ;)
Yes. We get transformed unknowingly. Our voice goes away from us, it is given back by the bird, we again start singing. All happens unknowingly. 'A Bird' notices it.
This poem may have 'lost something' when translated, but I enjoyed it. 3 stars in its English form. ;) bri
Thanks dear Bri Edwards! Yes, something is always lost in translation.