Monday, November 2, 2015

A Bike Ride Comments

Rating: 4.9

On the backseat of your bike I left my mind.
Body is on the lonely bed, closing eyes
Counting tranquil waves of night.
But the pupils of my heart are still mesmerized,
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Sanjukta Nag
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Souren Mondal 04 November 2015

'Fragrance of dust opened itself on us, and I revealed my faith on the nearness of your back. Moments passed, you stopped, I didn’t.' Stunning imagery and incredible and vivid descriptions... You turned a bike ride into a perfect poetic experience and expressed it with sheer perfection... A beautiful read Sanjukta...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2015

Enjoyable poem with love and bike ride. Best feeling shared. Thanks for sharing. ...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2015

Waves of night; with the fences of love. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2015

A nicely written poem, apparently a Bike Ride but being symbolic has many lovely meanings.

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Liza Sudina 02 November 2015

wonderful bike trip with a friend!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 November 2015

Most memorable ride with it's bold imprints , delicately unveiled through a lovely verse. Thanks for sharing.10+

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2015

A journey...unforgettable....A love...memorable....and writer....Lovable...........Marks........Infinite

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Loke Kok Yee 02 November 2015

beautiful memories beautiful poem love unceasing thanks-10

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Vishal Sharma 02 November 2015

it seems to be an enjoyable ride great image

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