Thursday, August 9, 2012

A Big Tree In Ntoane! Comments

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Big tree by the road side in Ntwane
In the morning the shadow lean on the road
Under it! It clenches calm breeze.
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Jacques Sprenkie Mateya
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Saadat Tahir 10 August 2012

nice ideas congealing nature and yet in contradiction highlighting death... liked the over all impact of the poem cheers

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James T. Abel Adesitimi 10 August 2012

Nice poem! I like the usage of your words

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 10 August 2012

This is a good poem. I like it.

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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

Jacques, a wonderful tribute to such a precious tree, more than a tree... a monument to all living things. -Kelly.

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Unwritten Soul 09 August 2012

Nice idea Jacques, it is a cool write, write more OK_Unwritten Soul

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 09 August 2012

Nice poem. Keep it up.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 09 August 2012

Keep it up. nice poem.keep it up

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Mark Dillon 09 August 2012

haven from the hot sun, coolness on a long hot day, softness underfoot, a nice tribute to natures natural protectors.nice write.

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