Sunday, May 24, 2009

A Big Surprise Comments

Rating: 5.0

thought that it was a sweet bird
chick, darling baby
therefore very much firmly
he was surprised
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

nice swirling poem Barbara..........good imagery and flow

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ngaio beck 29 August 2009

Until I discovered your work, I thought I understood English.

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fantastic tale in poetic form, works well.10 for this

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Dagmara Anna 24 May 2009

It is a very good satire. It is worthwhile reading. :) DA

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