A Bewitchment Comments

First half of the poem is superb but the last part something is missing.....Sorry, dont be angry.. U write nicely...in other poems.

Bewitching words with captivating weave. CP

A bewitching poem love can be such a pull on the heart strings as to surrender+++++10 regards

'And you love me affectionately and you want to be loved ' Rachel Ann Butler

i am drowning therefore you in this way don't look at me................ lave dazzles like rainbow by colors eyes raves up to the luscious glow moon bewitches ocean to wave still it hides in dark to hold tide, ...........wonderfully curved over rock of love bewitching the beholders, yetb ingenious through imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

Something that we need, a real authentic kind of love, like a kind of magic! Good piece indeed Maria.

i want my wife to tell me that.........

Delicate, sensitive and romantic.Shapely written. Very much I like it. :))