A Bewitching Tale Comments

I thought I was reading about my prom date, only to get to the end to find out otherwise. Perhaps I dated your grandma. Just kidding. Excellent poem. Provoke vidid imagery and was fun to read. Stone

Oh the lovely imagination of children, thanks for bringing back so many memories Shaun.

well constructed and easy reading, made me smile, what more can a poem do, bet you cant make me cry? Mick

You allow the reader to use their imagination to picture your words and even gives them a little chuckle at the end. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. Scott