A Better World Comments

It's worth a try! Thanks for sharing.

Verily, an outstanding and profound write, If such thing happens there will be no need, to pray God for heaven, for the earth will be a heaven, and all people superior than Angels. The poet's imagination shows a great depth of wisdom. Loved reading and commenting...........10

haha, , this is such an amusing write, , , The Taliban will build a church in Kabul and invite the Pope and his wife to open it. Fast food will slow down, the Israelis will paint their nuclear weapons gay pink and ship them to Iran. these lines are hillarious, , , and also i like the ending very much , , , this goes into my poemlist

Witty and very wise! If only to take a peak, your poem's worth a gem, one, more than big a giant! True, that would be indeed the better world. I really love this poem may I have it on my faves? Thank you!